Final Purdeys Critique

So today we had a crit on our work so far. the main feedback I wanted was on Purdey's as I took my final boards etc...


Here are my boards that I took to be critiqued:

Here is my feedback:

I was very disheartened by this feedback as there was nothing to improve & I knew that the boards wasn't perfect. This is annoying as I had given others very constructive feedback & for them to not be bothered to fill all the boxes out.